Rough Cut 2 Feedback

We received feedback from our teacher and class which let us know which parts of our title sequence need improving, we were also told our strong points and given new ideas which we intend to implement.

Starting with the positives:

Positives:

• Lighting
• Acting/Mise-En-Scene
• Shot Variety
• Use of Foley Sounds
• Use of Space 

Improve on:

• Message of the note
• Louder Foley Sounds 

Suggestions:

• Use voice over to convey message of the note
• Have a shot where Leo opens the door with a key
• Add music 
• Titles
• Follow the Production order 

We are grateful to our teacher and classmates for lending us some really clever suggestions to help improve our film. We wholly intend to use the a voice over to convey the message of the note, We feel that this will add an extra edge to our film and make it unique. 

The sounds that we wanted to add were not ready in time for the rough cut but we will definitely add sounds. We still are still deliberating as a group as to whether we will use background music and if so which song we would use. We will have no trouble making the Foley sounds louder in time for our next rough cut. 

Overall we are pleased with the feedback from this rough cut, we feel that it is an improvement on the last though we are aware that there are still improvements to be made. We will take the feedback on board and hopefully have an even better rough cut the next time around.