we plan to include the scenes we missed last time we shot and we will also fix the continually errors and costume errors we made the first.
Using the feedback we received we will make changes to the title sequence as said, to appeal more to the audience, these include the changes we plan to make above and other things they mentioned in the blog post of rough cut feedback. this is includes things such as making the acting more dramatic and fixing discontinuity
Full plan
- reshoot with better framed shots (ensure we can see his face)
- include closeups of ring and note
- add scene of leo putting down keys (with wife's keys still there)
- make sure leo picks up frame with the same hand
- include scene of leo putting down the frame and picking up note and putting it down again
- more dramatic ending
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