We feel the pitch was successful enough, we conveyed our ideas across and showed some of the clips and opening sequences of some of the films that inspired us such as Raging Bull & A few Good Men.
Feedback
This is a video of afater we had finished our presentation and were receiving feedback.
We received feedback from both our teacher and fellow students. To sum it up the positives were:
- That our opening sequence was realistic, smart and achievable
- Well planned and though out establishing shots
- In depth detail
- Well presented presentation
- Institutional detail
- Outline of the film
- Use of examples/ inspirations
- Good preparation
- Good research
We also received some constructive criticism
- Clearer information on what the props are for
- More detail on setting
- Better connection
- Clearer information on non-diegetic sound
- More variety in shots
- Pictures of the location
We intend to take all of this information on board, both the good and the bad to make the best possible film that we can make.
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