Group 18

Monday, 4 January 2016

refilming plan

For Wednesday 6th January we will be reshooting for our title sequence
we plan to include the scenes we missed last time we shot and we will also fix the continually errors and costume errors we made the first.

Using the feedback we received we will make changes to the title sequence as said, to appeal more to the audience, these include the changes we plan to make above and other things they mentioned in the blog post of rough cut feedback. this is includes things such as making the acting more dramatic and fixing discontinuity

Full plan

reshoot with better framed shots (ensure we can see his face)
include closeups of ring and note
add scene of leo putting down keys (with wife's keys still there)
make sure leo picks up frame with the same hand
include scene of leo putting down the frame and picking up note and putting it down again
more dramatic ending

blogging health check 3

feedback

in responce to the feed back i have received i have noticed the flaws in my blog that can be easily improved, i need to improve the frequency of my blog posts and focus on including research into simular products of the same genre and include feedback and audience reviews.

i can do this by:

comparing our rough cut to other openings, in the same genre
showing our rough cut to an audience and noting feedback
blogging between lessons at least 2-3 times a week
using more apps to present my blogs in a creative way
responding to audience feedback
blog filming and editing evidence

Blogging Healthcheck 3

I am pleased that I was able to achieve an A grade as it is what I was always working towards. I have taken my teachers feedback on board and will correct my blogs that need work. I intend to continue to work intensively on my blogs and continue to apply feedback so that I can solidify my A grade

SMART Targets

Targets i set myself on my progress based on my blog health check feedback.

Blogging Healthcheck 3

Ive done a lot better than my previous blog checks. I am now at A grade and need to keep at this level. I am happy with my feedback and will work on these targets. I have now completed target 2 and 1 and in the next 3 weeks i will post more evidence of my contribution to filming and editing.